Lunch at the Station
“What do you think
of immortality,
sir?”
“What do I
think of what?”
“What do you think
of immortality,
sir?
What if one
could live
forever?”
“I think, sir,
it would be
quite smashing!”
“Truly?”
“Truly!”
“Please, do tell.”
“I think it would be
quite smashing to see
how the world would
evolve over time.
Civilizations would rise,
empires would fall,
and one could be
witness to all!
And think, good man,
of advances
in science! Just think
where we’ll be by
next cent’ry – or next!
We might fin’lly acheive
our highest goal;
the complexity of
man perfected.”
“Perfected, you say?”
“Perfected, says I.”
“Pray tell how
that could be done.
After all, are we all
not flawed beings?”
“Indeed we are,
but do you not see?
Society is constantly moving.
Growing and learning and
building; improving on
what has been laid
in the past.
In time, good sir,
I surely believe
mankind can
achieve its
perfection.”
“You forget one thing.”
“And what thing is that?”
“Hist’ry is never precise;
‘tis always impure
and muddied in spots;
surely that would
not suffice, and
what makes you think
that will change?”
“Immortality, of course!”
“Immortality?”
“Yes! Immortality
granted to one.
If one were to live
through all diff’rent times,
that one could ensure
said hist’ry stays sound.”
“And you propose,
sir, that you be
the one?
History’s only immortal?”
“I never said that.”
“You inferred it,
good sir.”
“Well, would it
be all that bad?”
“I pity you, friend.”
“You pity me, sir?”
“I pity you, yes, indeed.
In this dream,
your fantastical dream,
you’ve forgotten
one obvious fact.
You forget that
everything dies.
You would be
the only immortal,
yet also would be the
lonely immortal.
The earth would still spin,
the seasons still change,
and sunset would always
fall West. But you,
my dear friend, would
outlive us all;
all you would
learn of is
Death.
How it comes in the night
and snaps like a trap;
how it whittles away
at life slowly;
How it withers the leaves
and crushes the flow’rs
and tears away
at human flesh.
Death would surround
and consume
all you love,
all that you now
hold most dear.
Until at last
you would wish,
my dear friend,
that Death your own
flesh would tear.
Is this the
life you would
choose, truly?”
“Hrmph! I suppose,
it is not.”





Hahaha, yeah, the conversation took a turn for the morbid as I was writing it out, but I rather liked the end result. Because, really, that’s what happens – just look at the Doctor! :P
Haha, but thanks. And the rhymes were wholly unintentional. They just happened!
October 3, 2011 at 1:19 pm
Good gracious! This is by far my favourite–so far! ;) I love it to bits!! I love the themes involved, like the depravity of man (by the way, read Incarceron!) and how it reminds me inevitably of Dr. Who. :D
Every time I think I’ve read your finest work, you publish another one of these. :P
October 3, 2011 at 9:26 pm
Good gracious! This is by far my favourite — comment, that is. :P
Seriously, though, I’m glad you liked it. Makes me laugh merrily. ^_^
October 3, 2011 at 9:55 pm
Gosh what a horrible thought . . . to live forever. I’m having a hard enough time just getting through one lifetime.
Again, very thought provoking.
October 12, 2011 at 9:46 pm
Isn’t it? I don’t think I could.
October 12, 2011 at 9:47 pm