Mindless No More
Blank pages of thought
ignite ‘cross the land,
a blazing inferno,
for none dare to stand
against the unknown
of what lies ahead;
they just bury their faces
in pictures instead.
Pictures of fame,
of splendor and wealth;
they live with no shame,
all while the health
of their minds go to hell,
for indeed they are burning –
defiant indifference –
no one is learning
from the times now long past,
where champions did thrive;
a time of great thought,
where minds were not hives.
For creative thought once
blazed across our great land,
where greater than sword
was the pen in the hand
of a writer – a thinker –
who declared with great power,
that mankind would sit still
no longer one hour
while liberty and life
faced destruction and death
at the hands of the few
who held power and wealth.
But such courage is lost now –
the great minds are dead;
why think when others
can do it instead?
Ignorant fools
we all have become,
ignorant to
the prize that was won
by those who once dared
to think and to fight,
to rise and defend
life and liberty with might
far stronger than what
is now present this day,
for none has the courage
to stand up and say,
“Enough is enough!
We’re through with your games!
We’re tired of waiting
and wishing for fame,
of letting the wealthy
determine our fate,
for we are the people,
and we are too great
to be silenced once more
by your pictures and sounds
of things merely fleeting –
we’re standing on ground
far higher than you
could e’er hope to achieve,
for we hold the truth
and we dare to believe
that justice and life
will burn bright once again;
that sorrow and strife
will finally end.”
And when that time comes,
the people shall sing
together as one –
true freedom shall ring!
From atop every hill
and shining bright tower,
the chorus will sound,
for it shall be the hour
that mankind once more
shall reclaim their own minds
from indifferent thought,
and then they shall find
that freedom is not
an inherited right –
‘tis not freely given –
for it you must fight
with all of the strength
of your heart, mind, and soul,
together as one;
for together, I know
that we can achieve
what we have now lost –
we must only believe
in what matters most.
So rise up, my brothers,
my sisters, my friends;
have courage and faith
to hold and defend
the truth that’s now sinking
in corruption’s deep well –
start fighting, start thinking!
Together expel
the lies and the hate
that have poisoned our land.
Rise with me, together –
united we’ll stand!
And from every corner of
Earth, Heav’n, and Sky,
our voice shall be heard –
as one we shall cry,
“The time has now come
for freedom for all!
The end has begun and
the wicked shall fall!
Fear us, you few,
who dare to oppress
our freedom of life,
for we never shall rest
until you are cast out
and stripped of your power.
Hear as we shout,
that this is the hour!
The time of your ending
has finally come!
Vengeance is swift;
it has only begun.”
Vengeance is swift;
it has only begun.





You have the courage to say “Enough is enough.” Great poem. It makes me want to be a better person.
March 30, 2012 at 8:11 pm
Thank you! ^_^ And that’s awesome. We need more people to do so for sure.
Thanks for reading/commenting/stopping by!
March 30, 2012 at 8:15 pm
So glad I found your blog … what an amazing poem. I am so fired up right now. It really inspired me. Thanks so much for sharing such insight and motivation and for hitting us (well, me at least) right in the heart. I needed that. We all need it. Amazing. :D
April 3, 2012 at 7:01 pm
Well thank you!!! :) I’m glad it got you stirred up and that it inspired you! You comment made me smile. :)
Thanks for dropping by! And, if I may ask, how did you find this blog? I’m always curious about how people stumble across it. ;P
April 3, 2012 at 8:12 pm
Poeticinvocation had stopped by my blog which got me interested in stopping by his. Then I saw some comments on one of his poems (namely, yours) which made me want to visit you. Amazing how this whole blogging thing works, isn’t it? So, to answer your question … poeticinvocation. :D
April 3, 2012 at 8:34 pm
Awesome! And yes, I love the blogging community. It’s by far the coolest thing ever. ^_^
April 3, 2012 at 8:53 pm
Well said and awesome poem, as always, Tim! :)
April 12, 2012 at 7:18 pm
Thanks, Lauren! ^_^
April 12, 2012 at 9:38 pm
Sage words for one so young, your soul is blessed with knowledge and integrity
April 23, 2012 at 7:23 pm
*bows head* Thank you, Enreal.
April 23, 2012 at 11:12 pm